domingo, 29 de agosto de 2010

Era One Time

When my father has 21 years old didn’t exist as technology as today. He didn’t has as opportunity as me . The computer was taller that today, but today are better that before. The cars are faster, more economic and others things. The city didn’t were as polluted , dirtied and crowded as today. Everyone have the opportunity with your epoch, and just enjoy can be happy.
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  1. cpierosan27 de setembro de 2010 às 07:32

    CORREÇÃO...

    When my father has 21 years old didn’t exist as (MUCH) technology as today. He didn’t (HAVE) (MANY) as opportunit(IES) as (I DO) . The computer was taller (??????????) (THAN) today, but today (THEY) are better (THAN) before. The cars are faster, more economic and other (-) things. The city (WASN'T) as polluted , dirt(Y) and crowded as today. Everyone (HAS) the opportunity (OF THEIR) epoch, and just enjoy can be happy

    ???
    TA MALS RICARDO, MUITOS MUITOS ERROS DE GRAMÁTICA...

    COMPARE A CORREÇÃO COM TEU TEXTO!
    ABRAÇO!

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